Letting Go

January 19, 2011
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Live twisted and tangled all alone
Below me rejection searches the city
I close my eyes, a moment of relief
Screams breaks death below
I am above it, powerful, worthy
I stand straight and open my eyes
One step closer I see the lights
Flashing red, so real, so close
Toes over the edge, wink in my hair
I raise my arms, close my eyes
I jump
Leaving the world to feel my pain and see its mistakes and love me for who I was

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George11 said...
Jan. 16, 2012 at 11:53 pm
I love this poem, and all of your work in fact. You need to post more soon because I really enjoy what you have done.
Katie lizzy said...
Jan. 16, 2012 at 11:50 pm
I LOVE how you can touch topics and social issues like this with such ease. The poem tells a story, conveys emotion, and expresses the sensitive topic of suicide. I think it is a great piece.
T.T. Brent said...
Jan. 16, 2012 at 11:47 pm
This is so creative and so cool! ha I looove it!!!!
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