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Love loves itself

January 25, 2011
By Evanescence GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
Evanescence GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
13 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is meaningless if u dont know who u are!

"A picture is worth a thousand words, yet a phew words from my heart can bring millions to your mind"

"History will be kind to me, because I will write it" - Winston Churchill


I wanted to love you,
and be loved in return.
So my soul won’t burn,
turning me away from you.
Loss of love kills me.
Not my goal.
Opening,
Opening,
the hole in the seal that gives me life.
My heart is steady failing.
Beating.
Beating.
From your mystique.
It falls from a mountain peak.
Falling,
“CRASH”
And hits the floor.
Knocking on deaths door.
I loved you once,
but no more.
Love didn’t care,
my heart now lorn.
And causes me to mourn,
for myself.
I no longer have no need for love,
for its useless for all else.
Love loves no one,
But Itself.


The author's comments:
This piece I was really proud of because its the first one that I've done In that way! Hope it gets to Teen INC. Magazine!

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on Feb. 8 2011 at 1:19 pm
Evanescence GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
13 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is meaningless if u dont know who u are!

"A picture is worth a thousand words, yet a phew words from my heart can bring millions to your mind"

"History will be kind to me, because I will write it" - Winston Churchill

I LOVE both!

on Feb. 8 2011 at 1:19 pm
Evanescence GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
13 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is meaningless if u dont know who u are!

"A picture is worth a thousand words, yet a phew words from my heart can bring millions to your mind"

"History will be kind to me, because I will write it" - Winston Churchill

I love both! I searched its meaning and It was powerful!

on Feb. 2 2011 at 4:55 pm
shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
14 articles 0 photos 175 comments

Favorite Quote:
-Biting's excellent. It's like kissing only there's a winner."-Doctor Who, The Tardis

"love loves no one but itself"--I like that line, and it's a good end to the poem. overall I like this, my only criticism is that some of the lines felt awkward, like "Not my goal."

By the way, I like your username--that's why I clicked on you. Do you like the band Evanescence, or the word, or both?