Paranoia

January 18, 2011
By Sissybug2012 PLATINUM, Union, Missouri
Sissybug2012 PLATINUM, Union, Missouri
36 articles 0 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
"the greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love and be loved in return." -MOULIN ROUGE (song lyrics)


I wonder if I were to close my eyes and take a leap,
Would I still be normal?
Or would you call me a freak?
I still think of ways to just let the past go.
But my past gave me scars.
It's something I never really wanted to show.
So if I promised to stop pacing, And tried to keep my brain from racing,
Would you still love me so?
Or would you just let me go?



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on Mar. 1 2014 at 1:14 pm
Sissybug2012 PLATINUM, Union, Missouri
36 articles 0 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
"the greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love and be loved in return." -MOULIN ROUGE (song lyrics)

Thank you!!!! :)  

on Jun. 11 2013 at 2:36 pm
Sketched97 PLATINUM, Silver Spring, Maryland
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It was emotional and relatable. Good job.

alex18 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 1 2013 at 12:42 pm
alex18 BRONZE, Jersey City, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"A certain darkness is needed to see the stars."

this is amazing

on May. 31 2013 at 5:46 am
Brittany-NamedTheFluffMastahNumber2 GOLD, Milford, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
The person that you'd take a bullet for is behind the trigger.
(song)
Miss Missing You - Fall Out Boy (:

oh my gosh, that was amazing :) great job 

on Apr. 22 2011 at 12:44 pm
Sissybug2012 PLATINUM, Union, Missouri
36 articles 0 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
"the greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love and be loved in return." -MOULIN ROUGE (song lyrics)

thank u very much....i appreciate all comments 

on Apr. 20 2011 at 11:08 am
GodsGirl36 PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
48 articles 3 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
Seeing isn't believing. Believing is seeing.

I love it! :D the voice is great and topic is...amazing :D lovelovelove

on Feb. 17 2011 at 9:39 am
Sissybug2012 PLATINUM, Union, Missouri
36 articles 0 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
"the greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love and be loved in return." -MOULIN ROUGE (song lyrics)

YEAH! julie is back! hooza

on Feb. 15 2011 at 1:12 pm
CaptainFabulous GOLD, Gray Summit, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes I believe in as many as six impossible things before breakfast" - Lewis Carroll

SARAH... i found you, love! I made a whole new thing on teenink so check me out sometime

BTW

Love this poem, so simple yet so true, keep writing!!


on Jan. 31 2011 at 1:57 pm
Sissybug2012 PLATINUM, Union, Missouri
36 articles 0 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
"the greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love and be loved in return." -MOULIN ROUGE (song lyrics)

thank u so much eagle and stormyflight!

Eagle PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 30 2011 at 9:47 pm
Eagle PLATINUM, Park City, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"I don’t have pet peeves — I have major psychotic f**king hatreds!"
George Carlin

This is realy good. Please keep writing.

on Jan. 30 2011 at 8:04 pm
Stormyflight GOLD, Arlington, Ohio
16 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
I finally admited God was God
-C.S Lewis
Humans are amphibous. Our spirit makes us eternal while the animal binds us to time.
-C.S Lewis

This poem was seriously awe inspiring, in one of those hit you like a mini sucker punch kinda ways:) Keep it up, dont let anyone tell you you dont have a gift for this!


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