Falling Wall

Cracked,




crumbling

Barely able to stand.










I cannot fall.

Broken,




sighing

Another piece falls.










I still stand.

Ancient,




fighting,

Here comes another hit.










I won't give in.

Unbreakable,




hoping,

A new day has arrived.










I'm still here.





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limelove said...
Jan. 30, 2011 at 5:08 pm
It's good but need inprovements. they don't need to be that far way from each other the spaces i mean,theres other things too but that was a big one for me. BUT I srill love it.
 
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