i thought you would understand

January 15, 2011
By falling10ssupernova SILVER, Warwick, New York
falling10ssupernova SILVER, Warwick, New York
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i know they were mean to you
and im sorry

im sorry because it made you defensive
im sorry they couldnt see you were sensitive

im sorry because now a joke is never a joke
im sorry about all the pain they invoked

im sorry about the tears they made you cry
im sorry you had to duck your head as you walked by

im sorry you had to act like you didnt care
im sorry that i wasnt there
when it hurt every day
there comments and ideas of fun play

im sorry that your a tortured soul
that nothing could make you feel whole

im sorry that you didnt feel loved
instead you were always being shoved

but can you see the way you treat me
dont you know how it feels to be low
dont you understand when you push me down
how much i hate being close to the ground
i guess i just thought you'd understand



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on Feb. 7 2011 at 5:33 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

This has really good rhyme, I notice things like that 'cause I can't rhyme worth beans XD My rhymes always come off as stiff.

You are a talented writer, and don't let anyone tell you otherwise :)





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