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The darkness fills the air
All around me
Darkness.

Alone.
Betrayed.
Forgotten.

People who have gone before
Me
All special
Wind my only friend

Snow whispers, while it hits the trees
Everywhere I look, words appear.

My head spinning.
Lists

of


Things


and


Things
I. Have. Done.
Everywhere

My only hope
Water

I feel

Angry

Frightened

Upset

Will anyone help me? I lay hopeless

Darkness fills the air
For the last time.
Alone
Betrayed
Forgotten.

All around me
Darkness.





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Soccerguy said...
Jan. 26, 2011 at 8:57 pm
i really like this I have a poem called darkness also =)
 
Karma_Crow This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 26, 2011 at 7:53 am

Quite wonderful. I understand your pain and hopelessness here. (Surley hope I am not offending you) But this quite good, I can feel the emotions your getting at. I only ask you keep up the work and do not let life get you down. I understand how that is at times. ^^

 

I ask once more of one thing...if you can look at my writing. Rate it/coment, it does not matter.

 
kaykaybeck replied...
Jan. 26, 2011 at 6:27 pm
I really like it.
 
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