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Float like a butterfly

Sting like a bee

Roar like lion

And sway like a tree

My fists are like rocks

And I pound like the sea

When I get to two

I’m coming for you

When I get to swinging

I‘ll have your ears ringing, so hard I'll have you swearing that death was knocking at your door.
You get up by two by three you flew
Knocked out so hard your walking like a drunk, but you came to fight and be the best
When I'm here my man I own all the fans, I run this town and I'm not going down




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mmmbriThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 22, 2011 at 7:20 pm:
this is really good! i like how you use the metaphor of fighting, while describing the elemental features. it's definatley something i've neve seen before, and something i hope to see again. Kudo's.
 
Kimberly replied...
Jan. 23, 2011 at 11:17 am :
Thank you.
 
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