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When i look at you i'm scared to touch you, when i touch you i'm scared to hug you, when i hug you, i'm scared to kiss you, when i kiss you, i'm scared to love you, when i love you, i'm scared to lose you.





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silence-is-loud said...
Jan. 21, 2011 at 8:26 pm
this is great.... only you didnt write this...
 
kayla70 replied...
Feb. 2, 2011 at 4:31 pm
why do people always say that? you know many people have the same imagination and things so dont go and assum things thats not cool
 
be_silent said...
Jan. 21, 2011 at 3:08 pm
off the internet or it just simply came to mind it is an extremely powerful quote, and i loved it <3
 
SOUp said...
Jan. 21, 2011 at 11:08 am
I love this!! BUt some ppl say that you got this from copy right!! IT is good
 
kayla70 replied...
Feb. 2, 2011 at 4:32 pm
i didnt copy write this i made it up when i was in a relationship but then we broke up
 
starstruck15 said...
Jan. 21, 2011 at 10:39 am
copyright? Ugh.. write your own.
 
kayla70 replied...
Feb. 2, 2011 at 4:34 pm
and how would you know that i copy wrote this you dont know me or my writing so dont assum things that you dont know about and get the facts first before sharing thank you
 
Eagle said...
Jan. 20, 2011 at 8:38 pm
This is off the web. Thats just not cool
 
jade-lynn15 said...
Jan. 20, 2011 at 3:52 pm
I really loved this...it's so simple yet so powerful.
 
unwrittenuntamed said...
Jan. 20, 2011 at 3:03 pm
I LOVE IT! Its something i can relate to! Great form and just...wow! :) :)
 
FireandWater This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 20, 2011 at 12:49 pm
love :)  it's well written, simply said is sometimes best.
 
time_captive said...
Jan. 20, 2011 at 10:53 am
I loved this :D It's very construitive. Nice.
 
gagalover22 said...
Jan. 20, 2011 at 8:10 am
wow! all i can say is WOW! i love this!
 
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