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When i saw you

January 10, 2011
By kayla70 BRONZE, Portland, Oregon
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kayla70 BRONZE, Portland, Oregon
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If you love somebody, set them free. If they return, they were always yours. If they don't, they never were.

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When i look at you i'm scared to touch you, when i touch you i'm scared to hug you, when i hug you, i'm scared to kiss you, when i kiss you, i'm scared to love you, when i love you, i'm scared to lose you.

© Torey B., McLean, VA

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kayla70 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 2 2011 at 4:34 pm
kayla70 BRONZE, Portland, Oregon
2 articles 2 photos 3 comments

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If you love somebody, set them free. If they return, they were always yours. If they don't, they never were.

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and how would you know that i copy wrote this you dont know me or my writing so dont assum things that you dont know about and get the facts first before sharing thank you
kayla70 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 2 2011 at 4:32 pm
kayla70 BRONZE, Portland, Oregon
2 articles 2 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you love somebody, set them free. If they return, they were always yours. If they don't, they never were.

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i didnt copy write this i made it up when i was in a relationship but then we broke up
kayla70 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 2 2011 at 4:31 pm
kayla70 BRONZE, Portland, Oregon
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If you love somebody, set them free. If they return, they were always yours. If they don't, they never were.

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why do people always say that? you know many people have the same imagination and things so dont go and assum things thats not cool
silence-is-loud GOLD said...
on Jan. 21 2011 at 8:26 pm
silence-is-loud GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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FLOAT LIKE A BUTTERFLY, STING LIKE A BEE- MUHAMMID ALI

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this is great.... only you didnt write this...
lgbt23 SILVER said...
on Jan. 21 2011 at 3:08 pm
lgbt23 SILVER, Hurst, Texas
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Paris is always a good idea.

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off the internet or it just simply came to mind it is an extremely powerful quote, and i loved it <3
SOUp said...
on Jan. 21 2011 at 11:08 am
I love this!! BUt some ppl say that you got this from copy right!! IT is good
HipsterUnicorn. BRONZE said...
on Jan. 21 2011 at 10:39 am
HipsterUnicorn. BRONZE, Pendleton, Oregon
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"Love is the Movement."

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copyright? Ugh.. write your own.
Eagle PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 20 2011 at 8:38 pm
Eagle PLATINUM, Park City, Utah
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"I don’t have pet peeves — I have major psychotic f**king hatreds!"
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This is off the web. Thats just not cool
Jayde_Marie_95 GOLD said...
on Jan. 20 2011 at 3:52 pm
Jayde_Marie_95 GOLD, Los Banos, California
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I really loved this...it's so simple yet so powerful.
LiveLoveMusic SILVER said...
on Jan. 20 2011 at 3:03 pm
LiveLoveMusic SILVER, Torrington, Wyoming
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"Dont be afraid for I am with you always."
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I LOVE IT! Its something i can relate to! Great form and just...wow! :) :)
June_Survive SILVER said...
on Jan. 20 2011 at 10:53 am
June_Survive SILVER, Kirbyville, Texas
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"Limitations live only in our minds. But if we use our imaginations, our possibilities become limitless.” -Jamie Paolinetti

"In the end, everything will be okay. If everything is not okay, it's not the end."
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I loved this :D It's very construitive. Nice.
dancergurl22 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 20 2011 at 8:10 am
dancergurl22 BRONZE, Grand Junction, Michigan
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Love, like you can't get hurt
Dance, like no one's watching
Live, like there's no tomorrow

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wow! all i can say is WOW! i love this!