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I am from the crystal clear stream in the mountains
I’m the breeze on the beach with the smell of the water on the air
I’m a brick red redwood tree standing perfectly still
I’m the fire that can destroy all
I’m the clear white in the world
I’m the innovative
I’m the your favorite song playing all around
This is me



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Tiffanie_marie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 21, 2011 at 10:40 am:

I love this poem(:

I also like the shortness of it because what I did was begin to imagine what I am. What is "me". Keep writing please(:

 

p.s. check out my poetry!

 
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starstruck15 said...
Jan. 21, 2011 at 10:38 am:
I like it, but maybe it's too simple?
 
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FireandWaterThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 20, 2011 at 12:45 pm:
that's like something i would write, have written.  i'd say a few more things would be better, make it longer.  but it's still good.  :)
 
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BroadwayBaby said...
Jan. 20, 2011 at 9:27 am:
This is really neat, but I think if you could make it a little longer, and name some more things it would be better.
 
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Skullcuffz said...
Jan. 20, 2011 at 8:25 am:
i love it it made me smile.. i don't know if i was suppose to but i did.. (:
 
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DrDoofenTess said...
Jan. 20, 2011 at 3:46 am:

always had a trouble with writing simple stuff .... but u wrote here is very simple and still very deep ...

i can keep reading this over and over again n still feel different aspects of YOU opening up

looks like this is who u truly are ... and if it is then YOU are amazing :)

 
thatjosephguyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 21, 2011 at 8:01 pm :

Nice poem

I think I know what religion you are

 

 
eagle replied...
Jan. 21, 2011 at 9:01 pm :
What?            
 
thatjosephguyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 23, 2011 at 4:43 pm :
Sry, this is kind of a stereotype, but a positive one.  M.ormon?  kind of meant it as a joke actually, I'm M.ormon, so... yah.
 
thatjosephguyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 23, 2011 at 4:43 pm :
ok, i meant it as a joke, but, r u M.o.rmon?
 
thatjosephguyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 23, 2011 at 4:44 pm :
L D S? possibly?  stereotyp.e I know
 
thatjosephguyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 23, 2011 at 4:47 pm :
r u M. O. R. M. O. N.?  sry, server doesn't like that word
 
Eagle replied...
Jan. 23, 2011 at 8:58 pm :
No               
 
thatjosephguyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 24, 2011 at 5:57 pm :
I am SO sorry, I was trying to get the message through, but it didn't work, I kept typing it up differently.  and it sent them all.  I hope you can forgive me.
 
Eagle replied...
Jan. 24, 2011 at 6:05 pm :
It's fine that's what most people think so i'm used to it.
 
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