This is me

January 10, 2011
By Eagle PLATINUM, Park City, Utah
Eagle PLATINUM, Park City, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"I don’t have pet peeves — I have major psychotic f**king hatreds!"
George Carlin


I am from the crystal clear stream in the mountains
I’m the breeze on the beach with the smell of the water on the air
I’m a brick red redwood tree standing perfectly still
I’m the fire that can destroy all
I’m the clear white in the world
I’m the innovative
I’m the your favorite song playing all around
This is me


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Eagle PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 24 2011 at 6:05 pm
Eagle PLATINUM, Park City, Utah
25 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I don’t have pet peeves — I have major psychotic f**king hatreds!"
George Carlin

It's fine that's what most people think so i'm used to it.

on Jan. 24 2011 at 5:57 pm
CharlesDickens SILVER, Georgetown, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 82 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I do not agree with what you have to say, but I'll defend to the death your right to say it."
~Voltaire

I am SO sorry, I was trying to get the message through, but it didn't work, I kept typing it up differently.  and it sent them all.  I hope you can forgive me.

Eagle said...
on Jan. 23 2011 at 8:58 pm
No               

on Jan. 23 2011 at 4:47 pm
CharlesDickens SILVER, Georgetown, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 82 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I do not agree with what you have to say, but I'll defend to the death your right to say it."
~Voltaire

r u M. O. R. M. O. N.?  sry, server doesn't like that word

on Jan. 23 2011 at 4:44 pm
CharlesDickens SILVER, Georgetown, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 82 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I do not agree with what you have to say, but I'll defend to the death your right to say it."
~Voltaire

L D S? possibly?  stereotyp.e I know

on Jan. 23 2011 at 4:43 pm
CharlesDickens SILVER, Georgetown, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 82 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I do not agree with what you have to say, but I'll defend to the death your right to say it."
~Voltaire

ok, i meant it as a joke, but, r u M.o.rmon?

on Jan. 23 2011 at 4:43 pm
CharlesDickens SILVER, Georgetown, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 82 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I do not agree with what you have to say, but I'll defend to the death your right to say it."
~Voltaire

Sry, this is kind of a stereotype, but a positive one.  M.ormon?  kind of meant it as a joke actually, I'm M.ormon, so... yah.

eagle said...
on Jan. 21 2011 at 9:01 pm
What?            

on Jan. 21 2011 at 8:01 pm
CharlesDickens SILVER, Georgetown, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 82 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I do not agree with what you have to say, but I'll defend to the death your right to say it."
~Voltaire

Nice poem

I think I know what religion you are

 


on Jan. 21 2011 at 10:40 am
Tiffanie_marie GOLD, Sedro-Woolley, Washington
18 articles 1 photo 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't tell me the sky is the limit, when there are footprints on the moon.

I love this poem(:

I also like the shortness of it because what I did was begin to imagine what I am. What is "me". Keep writing please(:

 

p.s. check out my poetry!


on Jan. 21 2011 at 10:38 am
HipsterUnicorn. BRONZE, Pendleton, Oregon
3 articles 0 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love is the Movement."

I like it, but maybe it's too simple?

on Jan. 20 2011 at 12:45 pm
HisPurePrincess ELITE, Flemington, New Jersey
132 articles 33 photos 483 comments
that's like something i would write, have written.  i'd say a few more things would be better, make it longer.  but it's still good.  :)

on Jan. 20 2011 at 9:27 am
Anonymousme GOLD, San Antonio, Texas
15 articles 2 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
John 3:16
For God so loved the world that he gave his one and only son so whoever believes in hill will not die but have eternal life.

Dreams are what make us who we are, a life without dreams is like a life without air.

This is really neat, but I think if you could make it a little longer, and name some more things it would be better.

on Jan. 20 2011 at 8:25 am
Skullcuffz SILVER, Waupaca, Wisconsin
6 articles 6 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before
--Edgar Allan Poe.


I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity.
--Edgar Allan Poe

i love it it made me smile.. i don't know if i was suppose to but i did.. (:

DrDoofenTess said...
on Jan. 20 2011 at 3:46 am
DrDoofenTess, Dubai, Other
0 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hope for the best .... Expect the worst .

always had a trouble with writing simple stuff .... but u wrote here is very simple and still very deep ...

i can keep reading this over and over again n still feel different aspects of YOU opening up

looks like this is who u truly are ... and if it is then YOU are amazing :)





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