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These Moments

The days without you seem so long.
Time seems to take slow on purpose.
I wish this was a movie that I could fast forward.
To the moment,
I see your gorgeous face.
To the moment you pull me into your loving embrace.
These moments are what keep me going on my worst day.
These moments make a good day amazing.





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BeautifulCacophony said...
Jan. 20, 2011 at 1:17 pm
That's so sweet!!! I absolutely love it! You are an amazing poet! I also read your other piece, The Nightmare Consumes Me, which was also phenominal. You really seem to pour your soul into your work, and it shows. It makes it so intense and real. Just terrific.
 
prettygirl85 replied...
Jan. 20, 2011 at 1:20 pm
:) thank you very much, im currently waiting for another of my poems to be accepted. i think u will really like it also
 
BeautifulCacophony replied...
Jan. 20, 2011 at 1:22 pm
Awesome!! Can't wait!
 
prettygirl85 replied...
Jan. 20, 2011 at 1:22 pm
have you submitted anyhting yet? if you undersatnd my writing i would really like to read what u write
 
BeautifulCacophony replied...
Jan. 20, 2011 at 1:24 pm
I did, but it's more of a fantasy, sci-fi sort of piece. I did have a couple other poems I was considering submitting though.
 
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