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I believed that we were
So in love
Because you made me feel so sure

BUT

You started slipping away
and I
couldn’t do anything
But cry.

THEN
YOU
LEFT

What had happened?
I thought we
Would never end.

All alone,
I couldn’t breathe.
because
I wasn’t ready
To see you leave





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ApiKarimi said...
Jan. 14, 2011 at 2:05 am
I love the way you wrote this. You went for the bold and simplistic method. Relatable, clear, and just wonderful. Good work.
 
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