Lucky

January 1, 2011
By phlogiston ELITE, Hermitage, Tennessee
phlogiston ELITE, Hermitage, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"A day without laughter is a day wasted" -Charlie Chaplin


I always get everything I want
Yet my heart feels so empty
I have everything I could need
But my life just doesn’t feel filled
I know I am selfish from wanting more
And that so many people have less
I just cant forget the one thing
Everything about my life is so perfect
But I can’t find happiness in it
It’s like I have no control of it anymore
Someone else has the wheel in their hands
There is nothing more I should ask for
I know I have already asked too much
I just can’t help losing my happiness
For the one thing I can never have
The thing that will make me beyond lucky
To make anyone’s wildest dreams come true
It’s you that would make everything perfect
But too lucky is what I already am


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on Feb. 20 2012 at 5:36 pm
phlogiston ELITE, Hermitage, Tennessee
224 articles 0 photos 117 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A day without laughter is a day wasted" -Charlie Chaplin

Thank you so much! Ya I feel like it's good to write about exactly how you feel because so many others are probably feeling exactly like you are.

on Jan. 15 2011 at 8:56 pm
Monkee63 SILVER, Independence, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"I want to feel my life while I'm in it"- Meryl Streep
"Live, Life Love"
"Everybody wants happiness, nobody wants pain, but you can't have a rainbow without a little rain."

wow the whole time i was reading that all I could think about was, wow thats exactly how I feel...this is so relatable...great job :)

on Jan. 15 2011 at 8:05 pm
falling10ssupernova SILVER, Warwick, New York
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yess it defiantly is at least for me and its well written too ill defiantly check out some of your other stuff

on Jan. 15 2011 at 5:20 pm
phlogiston ELITE, Hermitage, Tennessee
224 articles 0 photos 117 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A day without laughter is a day wasted" -Charlie Chaplin

Thank you so much! I am so glad that this is relatable. I will totally check out your stuff. You should see some of my others too.

on Jan. 15 2011 at 4:09 pm
falling10ssupernova SILVER, Warwick, New York
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wow i feel exactly the same way all of the time and its like i feel bad saying it b/c i know my life is so good i have no reason not to be happy but at the same time i cant find happiness really good poem i can really relate check out my stuff if you get a chance


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