Frozen

December 13, 2010
By ForeverDawn SILVER, Winnipeg, Other
ForeverDawn SILVER, Winnipeg, Other
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I can't even remember
The last time things were right
Once upon a time
I might have been
A summer blossom
But, now
I'm an icy rose
Frozen by the cold
Nearly lost forever forever
Edgy, yet beautiful
May be what I seem
But inside
I'm dead and empty
My thorns lash out
On everyone near
I'm sorry its you
I don't really like me either
A summer girl,
Turned a winter girl
Icy and cool
Forever trapped
BY whistling winds
You can't see the cold
But I always feel it



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on Jan. 15 2011 at 8:04 pm
falling10ssupernova SILVER, Warwick, New York
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thanks and yeah illl defiantly look at some of your other stuff 

on Jan. 15 2011 at 6:17 pm
ForeverDawn SILVER, Winnipeg, Other
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Thanks for your reply. I'm glad my poem reached you. I'm going to go check out your stuff right now. :)

on Jan. 15 2011 at 4:28 pm
falling10ssupernova SILVER, Warwick, New York
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this just made me cry im so sorry if you feel this way sometimes i do to im trying to change though check out my stuff if you get a chance


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