Stepping Beats

December 27, 2010
Songs don’t always rhyme
They simply keep time
As the music is changed
It is simply re-arranged
In our minds.

Every step taken
Creates a sound,
Which may be re-arranged
For your beats to make a change.





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open_your_eyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 24, 2011 at 6:52 pm
This is great! It makes perfect sence..
 
JMThe-one replied...
Aug. 24, 2011 at 6:58 pm
Is that sarcasm?
 
open_your_eyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 24, 2011 at 7:00 pm
no, why would it be?
 
JMThe-one replied...
Aug. 24, 2011 at 7:05 pm
The "..". Nevermind. Other than that I don't know why it would be. 
 
open_your_eyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 24, 2011 at 7:07 pm

can you check out some of my work?

and the .. was supposed to mean that i ran out of words

 
JMThe-one replied...
Aug. 24, 2011 at 7:10 pm
Sure. You should check out the rest of mine. and, I see. 
 
JMThe-one replied...
Aug. 24, 2011 at 7:30 pm

Did you check out the rest of my stuff?

 

 
open_your_eyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 24, 2011 at 7:32 pm
Ya, i loved your art, and the To Observe one made perfect sence. You are really talented.
 
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