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With you in latter days

December 29, 2010
By Mr-solo GOLD, Raleigh, North Carolina
Mr-solo GOLD, Raleigh, North Carolina
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everyday of my life my friends were called the walking dead yea bloody corpses that's what my dad always said
i never had a friend that was ever suppose to live but how am i suppose to forgive the gift that god gives
and every time i dream and find out that its not true i think about how things would've been with me and you
but then i cry because i know your dead to me i cant believe you said to me the things you did
but I'm not mad tho I'm just a little depressed
and all the rest what they say is just lies i hope they disappear who are they to tell me what we had just died
so i despise their souls even tho they might be right
in latter days we'll be together I'll close my eyes and take to flight


The author's comments:
I'll see her in latter days in this side or the next

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Mr-solo GOLD said...
on Jan. 17 2011 at 8:15 pm
Mr-solo GOLD, Raleigh, North Carolina
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i went to your profile to cheak out yours poems but i coundent find your work.

on Jan. 17 2011 at 3:27 pm
Lovebug07 PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
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no problem!! your really talented, it would be great if you could check out some of my work... i would love to get your opinion

Mr-solo GOLD said...
on Jan. 17 2011 at 12:12 pm
Mr-solo GOLD, Raleigh, North Carolina
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thanks i really apreciate it.

on Jan. 15 2011 at 3:58 pm
Lovebug07 PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
Laughter is a tranquilizer with no side effects. - Arnold Glasow

wow this is deep! i love it, good job!!