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Manless!

We will be in love forever, get married and have kids!
and I will treat you like a princess, I recall your promise
Here our anniversary comes and you didnt call me gorgeous
Not a word, not a text, not a letter ..
and I , your girl, your fiancé, your love.. you didnt miss?
If you dont call me I'll know we are over ..
and you made up an excuse .. using your sickness
and because it's a lie ,, I found the truth
now that you have lost me, Know I was never yours
Say you never loved anyone like you've loved me during a kiss
then forget about me the next day because you could careless
and Leave me a complete naive .. for being clueless
Now you realized what you have missed, and now I know you're worthless!
Told me I am the only one you ever see yourself with ..
why did I fall for that, since when was I mindless?
I did set you free, so dont come back to me
Have I not loved you with all my heart? Why are you wordless?
I didnt believe what I thought were lies about you
here I am breathing regret! thank you for being loveless
Why did you sing for me everyday why did you tell me you love me every second
and why did you lie? why did you leave me heartless?
You have broken my heart, and what pains me is knowing that I am stupid for loving you
You left me half broken, half dead.. thats what you wanted this Christmas?



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Shahed said...
Jan. 14, 2011 at 7:09 pm:

Thank you!! :)

I like that quote .. I think we fall in love too quick and its sad how when we give so much we get nothing in return, but its life!

 
Tina L. replied...
Jan. 14, 2011 at 7:18 pm :
Thats ok. Yes, I agree! Regardless of how good they seem to be, mostly they dont deserve what they get!
 
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Howell said...
Jan. 13, 2011 at 7:04 pm:

Everyday that I read more and more of your work it confuses me on which one to pick, as my favorite, You left me speechless!!

Great job, Shahed!

 
Shahed replied...
Jan. 14, 2011 at 7:12 pm :
Aww!! thank you ..
 
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Tina L. said...
Jan. 13, 2011 at 7:02 pm:

"If I never met you, I wouldn't like you. If I didn't like you I wouldn't love you.
If I didn't love you I wouldn't miss you, but I did, I do and I will."

I updated my facebook status to that quote, and then read this poem you have no idea how amazing this is! :) very good! 10/10 !!  

 
Shahed replied...
Jan. 14, 2011 at 7:11 pm :
Tina, when I replied it was posted as a new comment, so its the one before "Howell's comment"
 
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Mrs Abbott said...
Jan. 12, 2011 at 2:21 pm:

 

I am very proud of you. Keep up the good work! Very talented.

 

 
Shahed replied...
Jan. 12, 2011 at 4:36 pm :
Thank you Mrs. Abbott :) I'm so glad you like it :)
 
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Mister Hodge said...
Jan. 11, 2011 at 8:31 pm:
Great poem. It contains a volume of emotion. You have a strong voice and gripping ideas. I can't wait to see what else you write.
 
Shahed replied...
Jan. 12, 2011 at 4:35 pm :
Thank you so much .. your comment added brightness to my poem :)
 
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Razan A said...
Jan. 11, 2011 at 10:22 am:
I'm speechless !!!!!!!! I mean it !!! This is so undescrible, meaningful, and true !! I like how u reflected pure feelings n the how u organized ur thoughts. . . I Love the way u express ! ! ! God Bless Your Heart ;)
 
Shahed replied...
Jan. 11, 2011 at 7:41 pm :
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this, you know comments like yours inspire me to write more and put it all on paper .. thank you so much :) <3 and God bless you too!
 
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Jazmin B said...
Jan. 10, 2011 at 4:24 pm:
OMG!!!! I ABSOULTELY LOVE DIZ POEM! LOVE THE RHYMES, THE ENDINGS AND THE IDEA BEHIND THE POEM .. IF ITSIT'S BASED ON A REAL LIFE EXPERIMENT THEN I TOTALLY FEEL YOU AND IF ITSIT'S NOT ITSIT'S A GREAT POEM AND WONDERFUL IMAGINATION YOU GOT  :d ONE OF MY FAVORITE POEMS ON THIS WEBSITE!
 
Shahed replied...
Jan. 11, 2011 at 7:42 pm :
Aww thank you!! :) first comment always gets my attention and really reflects a lot about my work, its like the first reflective writting i get on every poem lol .. thank you! :)
 
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