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Secrets...

December 19, 2010
By alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."


I have to tell you something.
Don’t tell anyone ok?
Promise?
Ok.
Here it is,
But don’t tell…

Did you tell her?!
She said you did.
I promise I won’t be mad,
I just want the truth…

I’ll ask one more time,
I promise I won’t be mad.
The truth.
That can’t be the truth!
Because now THREE other people know.
And I didn’t tell them…

I can’t trust you any more…

Psst,
I have to tell you something.
Don’t tell anyone else, ok?
Pinky promise?
Ok,
Here it is.
But don’t tell…


The author's comments:
Dontcha hate it when the one person you THINK you can trust ends up telling your secret to someone who tells someone else who tells someone ELSE!? Yeah...me too.

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on Jan. 8 2011 at 9:41 am
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."

haha! i love how you 'freakin love this'! (no sarcasm :D) glad you liked it !!!! thank ya!

on Jan. 7 2011 at 10:23 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
What the front door.

dont you hate it when somebody does something and then suffers for it then goes out and does it again? sike, thats what i enjoyed about the poem. i freakin love this captain. i love the beggining and ending. do your dance.

on Jan. 7 2011 at 9:16 am
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."

Haha yeah it made me really sad that a good friend of mine i trusted couldn't keep her mouth shut and told some1else that couldn't keep their mouth shut and she told some1 else who told some 1 else!!! :( sad day haha

on Jan. 7 2011 at 8:35 am
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

MAN I can relate to this. I DO hate it. A lot. I really like how you wrote this.. The style is really creative and I love the use of repetition :)