Secrets...

December 19, 2010
By alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."


I have to tell you something.
Don’t tell anyone ok?
Promise?
Ok.
Here it is,
But don’t tell…

Did you tell her?!
She said you did.
I promise I won’t be mad,
I just want the truth…

I’ll ask one more time,
I promise I won’t be mad.
The truth.
That can’t be the truth!
Because now THREE other people know.
And I didn’t tell them…

I can’t trust you any more…

Psst,
I have to tell you something.
Don’t tell anyone else, ok?
Pinky promise?
Ok,
Here it is.
But don’t tell…


The author's comments:
Dontcha hate it when the one person you THINK you can trust ends up telling your secret to someone who tells someone else who tells someone ELSE!? Yeah...me too.

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on Jan. 16 2011 at 10:42 am
Zazawish777 GOLD, KC, MO, Missouri
16 articles 2 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
life isn't passing me by, it's trying to run me over!

this was awesome. 5 stars. Please rate and comment on  mine plz. 

on Jan. 15 2011 at 9:50 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

ehhh, merci mais ils ont besoin de l'assistance.

alanacarlene said...
on Jan. 14 2011 at 10:25 pm
hahaha i'll definately give you some feedback!

on Jan. 14 2011 at 8:00 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

I know right? i wish you could review them efore i posted them on this sucker. i would back your love feed.

alanacarlene said...
on Jan. 14 2011 at 6:21 pm
aw man that's exactly how i feel! i wrote a few haikus and a free verse but theyre not very good except for one haiku :\ ughhhh it's lik a nightmare that will...not...end!

on Jan. 14 2011 at 3:42 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

dont know, i need to...cause i suck. imma read them over and see if they're ready. someone needs to cut me open and see if im ready, i dont feel like a writer anymore.

alanacarlene said...
on Jan. 11 2011 at 6:13 pm
Ok! My internet wasn't working yesterday so i couldn't reply to this message but if i could've i would've said "OMG! yay! I'm totally gonna check em out! i'm excited!" and i was and i did and i loved em! :)

alanacarlene said...
on Jan. 11 2011 at 3:31 pm
ah yeah are you gonna post em on teenink?

on Jan. 10 2011 at 8:05 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

yeah, you know, the brain connections you make everytime you kill the writers block.

on Jan. 10 2011 at 4:20 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."

haha synapses? really? welllll at least it's something hahahaha :D

on Jan. 10 2011 at 3:25 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

HEY!!!! A lot of my poems just got published!!! :) Theres "A Wall", "Crying for the Future", "Not Just Another Sunset", and "An Electric Current, Dancing Lips, Flushed Cheeks, and Bold Smiles"..... I think thats all :P Oh! And my one I translated from Vigil's spanish assignment. Though yours TOTALLY beasted on mine and was amazing. Mine's called "Amor" :P :))))))))))

on Jan. 10 2011 at 9:47 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

i wrote two last night. something about the synapses...i dont know.

on Jan. 9 2011 at 4:23 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."

Yeah haha a funny thought....my writer's block is slowly starting to fade away and i've written 3 things even though they're not that good but still! the point is my writer's block is lessening.

on Jan. 9 2011 at 3:56 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

...just thethought that occurs...

on Jan. 9 2011 at 3:30 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."

ahhhahahaha! no i wouldn't've thought that! and i assure you i wouldn't have thought that you were a loser! haha that made me laugh! :D

on Jan. 9 2011 at 2:40 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

well yeah, but I figured "if i comment on this shell be like 'now you dumb cow, you're just commenting on all my stuff arent you? just for the sake of the monkey? loser' "

on Jan. 8 2011 at 8:07 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."

ohh haha yeah feather filled people no hahahaha feather-filled pillow ha :D really you liked it? well thanks

on Jan. 8 2011 at 5:37 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

feather pillow people. sike. no really, feathered pillow?

on Jan. 8 2011 at 5:15 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."

Well thanks which poem was it? and i prbly would'nt've thought that

on Jan. 8 2011 at 4:30 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

honestly, there was another poem you wrote that I didnt comment on because I didnt want you to thinki was just commenting on all your stuff for the sake of-. but I did like it. sincerity captain.




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