Take Me Away

Take me away.
Away from the pain and the hurt.
Somewhere where there was never a you.
A place that I can be happy instead of depressed.
I want to be able to bathe in the light of someones love.
I want to be able to move on.
Take me somewhere else so that I can think.
I need to be able to clear my mind.
Maybe you could take me to a place with no one else
So it will be just us.
I could make you love me.
You loved me once, why can't you again?
I guess I'll sit here and wait for you to come and take me away.
I just hope you come quick, I might die before you get here.
The pain is almost to much to bear...





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SMWells said...
Jan. 8, 2011 at 5:18 pm
Another less than bright view poem. What makes you so gloomy? I do not mean to be impolight. But it hurts to think someone is so unhappy. I supose it is easy for me to sympithise because I used to allwase be unhapy. I wish I could help.
 
lacilynn12 replied...
Jan. 8, 2011 at 5:46 pm
I'm actually a very happy person. My poems come from things that happen to me or people I know. It's not necessarily how I feel all the time.
 
S M Wells replied...
Jan. 8, 2011 at 7:27 pm
Bless you! I know actzactly how you feel.
 
lacilynn12 replied...
Jan. 8, 2011 at 7:50 pm
Haha. At least one person understands me. :)
 
S M Wells replied...
Jan. 8, 2011 at 7:54 pm
Is that so surprising?
 
lacilynn12 replied...
Jan. 8, 2011 at 8:03 pm
Yes it is.
 
S M Wells replied...
Jan. 8, 2011 at 8:31 pm
Oh. Well I'll have to take your word for it.
 
lacilynn12 replied...
Jan. 8, 2011 at 9:06 pm
Haha. Ok. 
 
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