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December 9, 2010
By ello_melo BRONZE, Bristol, Other
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On this pillar valiance stands,
To eagle-eye the lands below,
And watch as prosperous pasture strands,
Peek up from Earth; in sunlight grow,
And as the sun begins to set,
Dyeing blue the colour love,
In the radiance don’t forget,
I’ll be watching up above.
When night is here and darkness lands,
And morning’s sun is behind bars,
I promise you I’ll wave my hand,
And percolate your sky with stars.

© Jordan K., Oxford, GA

The author's comments:
This was meant for someone but I'm not really sure if they deserve it anymore, so it's here now. Anyway, I'd love it if you commented, I like constructive critisism. But no bashing! It's my first poem XD
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