When I Open My Eyes

December 8, 2010
By dancingintheflames GOLD, Kirksville, Missouri
dancingintheflames GOLD, Kirksville, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
She stood in the storm and when the wind didn't blow her away, she adjusted her sails<3


Dreaming,
He loves you,
He got your hand in his,
His arms around you in the hallways,
But when you open my eyes,
He pushes you away,
But you want him so bad,
You know yourself,
You strut down the hallways,
Nobody back-stabs,
But when you open your eyes,
They stab you so many times,
Your heart almost dies,
You fall so hard in the mist of a dream,
Become so confident,
So in love,
So that when I open my eyes,
I see a world filled with monstrosity,
Dreaming.



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on Jan. 23 2011 at 5:46 pm
dancingintheflames GOLD, Kirksville, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
She stood in the storm and when the wind didn't blow her away, she adjusted her sails<3

Thank you so much! :)

on Jan. 3 2011 at 3:41 pm
sweetly_broken GOLD, Garner, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
We never know how big we are until we are asked to rise.

This is really good! you worded it and broke up the lines so that it felt as if you were reading it in a dreamy way. keep up the good work!


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