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When I Open My Eyes

Dreaming,
He loves you,
He got your hand in his,
His arms around you in the hallways,
But when you open my eyes,
He pushes you away,
But you want him so bad,
You know yourself,
You strut down the hallways,
Nobody back-stabs,
But when you open your eyes,
They stab you so many times,
Your heart almost dies,
You fall so hard in the mist of a dream,
Become so confident,
So in love,
So that when I open my eyes,
I see a world filled with monstrosity,
Dreaming.



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gracegirl29This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 3, 2011 at 3:41 pm:
This is really good! you worded it and broke up the lines so that it felt as if you were reading it in a dreamy way. keep up the good work!
 
DaddiesDoodleThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 23, 2011 at 5:46 pm :
Thank you so much! :)
 
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