The wall

December 13, 2010
By urhere3 PLATINUM, Girard, Ohio
urhere3 PLATINUM, Girard, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life goes by fast If you don't stop and look around once and awhile, you just might miss it." - Ferris Bueller


Cold
Hard
Unbreakable
Unbearing
Lonesome and unforgiving
This wall is in my way
The Climb
Consuming
Depressing
Driving
Patient
Testing how much I love thee
The Rest
Little
None
Unwanted
Unneeded
It's the love that leaves me up
The Top
High
Unfailing
Perfect
Love
I've finally found your love
I blew our wall away
Nothing can shut out true love
I will beat this wall down for you.


The author's comments:
No bars, no walls, no anything, can block true love.

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S M Wells said...
on Jan. 5 2011 at 9:03 am
I can understand that.

on Jan. 4 2011 at 7:59 pm
urhere3 PLATINUM, Girard, Ohio
25 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life goes by fast If you don't stop and look around once and awhile, you just might miss it." - Ferris Bueller

That makes sense. I just enjoy what I get though and write for specific people rather then a general audience, so when my poem is portrayed the way I wish for it to be I feel I showed the specific person it was written for the right message.

S M Wells said...
on Jan. 4 2011 at 7:59 am
Well it's at least sweet of you to be contented so easily. I think I prefer when my family, [who are my mane critics] argue over a poem. It normily means there is some small something to it.

on Jan. 3 2011 at 11:03 pm
urhere3 PLATINUM, Girard, Ohio
25 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life goes by fast If you don't stop and look around once and awhile, you just might miss it." - Ferris Bueller

Oh but you do, I don't think much of any of my work to be honest, but that's the exact impression I was hoping you'd all get, sweet and caring. So I am content.

S M Wells said...
on Jan. 3 2011 at 5:02 pm
Don't think I deserv any thanks. Nevertheless... you are welcom.

on Jan. 3 2011 at 4:09 pm
urhere3 PLATINUM, Girard, Ohio
25 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life goes by fast If you don't stop and look around once and awhile, you just might miss it." - Ferris Bueller

Why thank you ^^

S M Wells said...
on Jan. 2 2011 at 9:02 pm
This is really sweet. And I don't beleive there is one famous poet that could have put it better.




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