Smile

December 8, 2010
By Jennypig GOLD, Winslow, Maine
Jennypig GOLD, Winslow, Maine
13 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get living or get dying -Stepen King
We are a little weird and life is a little weird, so when we find someone who's weirdness is compatible with our own, we fall in a mutual weirdness and call it love. -Dr. Seuss


Your tummy tickles and your head spins
Tears come out and your overwhelmed
You blush a little and smile
You are too happy to speak anything
You start shaking and thinking of possibility
You don’t want to leave, for fear you might forget
What am I going to tell everyone? Is always a first question
You walk around for days with the smile that they gave you


The author's comments:
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on Dec. 3 2011 at 2:37 pm
Plain-Jane ELITE, Grandview, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"And the Lamb at the center of the throne will be their Shepherd. He will guide them to springs of living water; and God will wipe away every tear from their eyes." Revelation 7:17

Great description! I love the last sentence. But i would change "speak" to "say". and also "your" should be "you're". sorry i'm kind of a grammar freak... but i really like the poem!

on Nov. 23 2011 at 3:41 pm
Phresshmen SILVER, Miami, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
“We come to love not by finding a perfect person, but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly” -SAM KEEN
"You cant change someone who dont want to be changed, but you can help someone who needs it" -yours truly

I really like this and i think most people can relate to it good job

on Nov. 23 2011 at 3:35 pm
Wonderment DIAMOND, Scranton, Pennsylvania
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I like it. I think you described the feeling behind a smile well. It made me smile at the end. lol




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