December 8, 2010
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Your tummy tickles and your head spins
Tears come out and your overwhelmed
You blush a little and smile
You are too happy to speak anything
You start shaking and thinking of possibility
You don’t want to leave, for fear you might forget
What am I going to tell everyone? Is always a first question
You walk around for days with the smile that they gave you

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MsAnonymous This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 3, 2011 at 2:37 pm
Great description! I love the last sentence. But i would change "speak" to "say". and also "your" should be "you're". sorry i'm kind of a grammar freak... but i really like the poem!
Phresshmen said...
Nov. 23, 2011 at 3:41 pm
I really like this and i think most people can relate to it good job
Wonderment said...
Nov. 23, 2011 at 3:35 pm
I like it. I think you described the feeling behind a smile well. It made me smile at the end. lol
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