Lost in Your Fairy Tale

December 5, 2010
By pink-ink BRONZE, Laurens, South Carolina
pink-ink BRONZE, Laurens, South Carolina
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I gave you the palm of my hand

And you took it

Now my life is mayhem

And crooked

Somehow you made my world

Water and land

But now I’m drowning

In your earthquake

I’m going underground

You make me confused

And frustrated

Tears fall onto my cheeks

And I can’t help it

It feels like I was living a lie

Yet it felt so real

How can we end this way

We were a fairy tale



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on Dec. 24 2010 at 4:14 pm
pink-ink BRONZE, Laurens, South Carolina
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thank you so much

on Dec. 24 2010 at 4:14 pm
pink-ink BRONZE, Laurens, South Carolina
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thanks. that means a lot to me.

Kai17 GOLD said...
on Dec. 24 2010 at 3:18 pm
Kai17 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
*beepbeep*
"Where to, Miss?"
"To the stars."

I love your writing. Your poetry is amazing!

on Dec. 23 2010 at 6:57 pm
Destinymarina SILVER, Muscle Shoals, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
im the type of girl that will brighten your day when i can\'t even brighten my own

This is an amazing poem! i lovvee it


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