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Linger

Show that you care
I want to see that I know
You’re the one for me
I want to kiss you
And not feel you pull away
I want you to
Linger

Can you tell me
That you don’t feel the same
Can you tell me
That the feelings are gone
Tell me you don’t want to
Linger

Wishing I could know
What you are thinking
Hoping you want me to
Linger
As we kiss in the rain
Time goes by as we
Linger

I want to be with you
I want to feel your lips
Linger near mine
Waiting for me
To make the next move

I want you to linger
And not feel you pull away
I want to kiss you
You’re the one for me
I want to see that I know
Show me you care
Linger.



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FunFace said...
Dec. 19, 2010 at 6:51 pm:

i love the way you kept the word linger throughout it was really good.

I think that parts of it didn't flow as nicely as they could have but i really liked the images and the use of linger.

ANd i also think that in the first stanzas the word linger was slightly forced but it is really good keep writing

 
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