Love is

November 27, 2010
By , Decatur, TN
Love is death love is hurtful
it tortures the inoccent soul
your lost without it
but love can be heartwarming
every minute of the day it's lost and found again
what is love to you?





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aphilly said...
Dec. 13, 2010 at 7:54 pm
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kitkat95 said...
Dec. 13, 2010 at 4:26 pm
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rmp707 said...
Dec. 13, 2010 at 3:07 pm
"Love is death love is hurtful" (L.1), this line says that love dies and can be hurtful. Love is a powerful word. Many teenagers use this word and do not mean it at all. "Your lost without it" (L.3), I do not agree with this line. I know people who has never been in love and are not lost without it. 
 
wendell15 said...
Dec. 13, 2010 at 12:30 pm
"Love is death love is hurtful"(L.1), is a good line. I like it. The first line can be symbolized to a person that loved him/her so much that he/she died. That's why love can be hurtful even in death. "Every minute of the day it's lost and found again"(L.5), is a line that is significant to me. When I'm at school, and when I see this girl I like, its like I like her then the next minute I don't.
 
DANCE_LYKS_CRAZY replied...
Dec. 13, 2010 at 1:53 pm
im glad people can relate to this poem
 
DANCE_LYKS_CRAZY said...
Dec. 13, 2010 at 8:33 am
s by me sarah
 
YankeeSwagg replied...
Dec. 13, 2010 at 9:00 am
i can totally relate. keep writing (:
 
dance_lyks_crazy replied...
Dec. 13, 2010 at 9:04 am
thanks 
 
kab503 replied...
Dec. 13, 2010 at 12:30 pm
You did a great job at writing this poem. I like how you start it off on line 1 where you say "Love is death love is hurtful"because this describes what love can do to a person. You can make this better by giving more explanations of what love really is.
 
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