Love is

November 27, 2010
By Anonymous

Love is death love is hurtful
it tortures the inoccent soul
your lost without it
but love can be heartwarming
every minute of the day it's lost and found again
what is love to you?

The author's comments:
this is about what people think about love

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on Dec. 13 2010 at 7:54 pm
aphilly DIAMOND, St. Paul Park, Minnesota
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on Dec. 13 2010 at 4:26 pm
kitkat95 SILVER, Lake Worth, Florida
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rmp707 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 13 2010 at 3:07 pm
rmp707 BRONZE, Plaquemine, Louisiana
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"Love is death love is hurtful" (L.1), this line says that love dies and can be hurtful. Love is a powerful word. Many teenagers use this word and do not mean it at all. "Your lost without it" (L.3), I do not agree with this line. I know people who has never been in love and are not lost without it. 

Sarah_ GOLD said...
on Dec. 13 2010 at 1:53 pm
Sarah_ GOLD, Decatur, Tennessee
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A wise girl kisses but doesn't love she leaves before shes left

im glad people can relate to this poem

wendell15 said...
on Dec. 13 2010 at 12:30 pm
wendell15, Plaquemine, Louisiana
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"Love is death love is hurtful"(L.1), is a good line. I like it. The first line can be symbolized to a person that loved him/her so much that he/she died. That's why love can be hurtful even in death. "Every minute of the day it's lost and found again"(L.5), is a line that is significant to me. When I'm at school, and when I see this girl I like, its like I like her then the next minute I don't.

kab503 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 13 2010 at 12:30 pm
kab503 BRONZE, Plaquemine, Louisiana
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You did a great job at writing this poem. I like how you start it off on line 1 where you say "Love is death love is hurtful"because this describes what love can do to a person. You can make this better by giving more explanations of what love really is.

on Dec. 13 2010 at 9:04 am
thanks 

on Dec. 13 2010 at 9:00 am
YankeeSwagg PLATINUM, Holly Springs, North Carolina
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Every burden is a blessing

i can totally relate. keep writing (:

Sarah_ GOLD said...
on Dec. 13 2010 at 8:33 am
Sarah_ GOLD, Decatur, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
A wise girl kisses but doesn't love she leaves before shes left

s by me sarah




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