asleep

By , eureka, CA
I fell asleep in my underware
crying with the heating blacket on
hugging a pillow with my legs
a tissu box in my arms





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416tmw said...
Dec. 10, 2010 at 11:35 am
Nice poem love the first line, i know the feeling, But hey, try spell check next time.
 
kkd303 said...
Dec. 10, 2010 at 11:23 am
Overall it was nice
 
kkd303 said...
Dec. 10, 2010 at 11:22 am
The poem should have been longer and should have been more explainable after the line "a tissu box in my arms." Also, the word "tissu" was spelled wrong. 
 
Ducttape.isnt.tear.proof replied...
Dec. 18, 2010 at 5:35 pm
dose it matter??? lay off so what i cant spell
 
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