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asleep

November 20, 2010
By Anonymous

I fell asleep in my underware
crying with the heating blacket on
hugging a pillow with my legs
a tissu box in my arms



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on Dec. 18 2010 at 5:35 pm
Ducttape.isnt.tear.proof GOLD, Eureka, California
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can't handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don't deserve me at my best."
— Marilyn Monroe
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, and leaves before she is left."
— Marilyn Monroe
"I am good, but not an angel. I do sin, but I am not the devil. I am just a small girl in a big world trying to find someone to love."
— Marilyn Monroe
"Who said nights were for sleep?"
— Marilyn Monroe
"Sex is part of nature. I go along with nature."
— Marilyn Monroe

dose it matter??? lay off so what i cant spell

416tmw BRONZE said...
on Dec. 10 2010 at 11:35 am
416tmw BRONZE, Plaquemine, Louisiana
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Nice poem love the first line, i know the feeling, But hey, try spell check next time.

on Dec. 10 2010 at 11:23 am
imkayydavis SILVER, Missouri City , Texas
7 articles 1 photo 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be yourself and not who people want you to be."

Overall it was nice

on Dec. 10 2010 at 11:22 am
imkayydavis SILVER, Missouri City , Texas
7 articles 1 photo 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be yourself and not who people want you to be."

The poem should have been longer and should have been more explainable after the line "a tissu box in my arms." Also, the word "tissu" was spelled wrong.