Rin-ring Cre-ack

November 17, 2010
Through the empty air I hear:
Rin-ring Cre-ack.
Through the gray and coolness fair:
Rin-ring Cre-ack.
A lonely girl rocks on a swing
Rin-ring Cre-ack.
Pail and unaware
Rin-ring Cre-ack.
Waiting in the schoolyard there
Rin-ring Cre-ack.
Haunting grayish evenings
Rin-ring
Waiting
Cre-ack
Trapped
Rin-ring
Revenge!
Cre-ack
For the man
Rin-ring
That taught her
Cre-ack
That’s unsuspected
Rin-ring
Revenge
Cre-ack
For the man
Rin-ring…
That killed her!
Rin-ring Cre-ack!
Rin-ring Cre-ack!
RIN-RING CRE-ACK!!!





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elisianicole101 said...
Dec. 14, 2010 at 10:02 am
Soooo i already told you that i love this and every time i read it it gets better and better(:!!!
 
alanacarlene replied...
Dec. 14, 2010 at 3:01 pm
Hehe YAY I'm glad you think so! Hahahaha thank youuuuuuuuuuuu :))))))
 
GangstaEyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 9, 2010 at 9:22 am

Ooooh creepy! :) Did ya have to write this for a certain class or just because?

And I have a new one published! It's called "We've Only Just Met... And Yet" It's about that guy :) I wrote it before we were even dating, like a week after I met him :)))) (There's one more pending but it's not out yet..) Just so ya know! :)

 
alanacarlene replied...
Dec. 10, 2010 at 4:30 pm

I wrote it just because!

And I'm totally gonna check it out now!!!!!! Teehee it's that guy we were talking about? Yay can't wait to read it!!!

 
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