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This Dream

November 17, 2010
By Care101 BRONZE, Sacramento, California
Care101 BRONZE, Sacramento, California
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Favorite Quote:
"The truth is, everyone's going to hurt you. You just have to find the ones worth suffering for." - Bob Marley


Those eyes I see,
When you look at me.
The feeling never seems to cease,
A weakening in the knees.
I can’t help but think,
That this ship will sink.
But that stops with a smile,
That makes it all worth while.
So will I get hurt?
I know it will be curt.
And come really quickly,
You see.
But for now I will dream,
My mind floating in the sea
Of how my heart melts
When you look at me.



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s3r3nd1p1ty said...
on Dec. 7 2010 at 5:08 pm
s3r3nd1p1ty, Longwood, Florida
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I like the concept, but i think when you try so hard to make things rhyme, your poems lose some meaning. just my opinion though :)

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