The One for Me?

November 11, 2010
By MacSchiff SILVER, Louisville, Kentucky
MacSchiff SILVER, Louisville, Kentucky
8 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You can't live your life for other people. You've got to do what's right for you, even if it hurts some people you love."
— Nicholas Sparks (The Notebook)

"When you're struggling with something, look at all the people around you and realize that every single person you see is struggling with something, and to them, it's just as hard as what you're going through."
— Nicholas Sparks (Dear John)


Let these words escape my lips
And rub off from my finger tips.
From the very start
You've touched my heart
In ways unexplainable
You're everything undeniable.

My gift sent from above
For that I am sure of.
You're blue eyes glisten,
While you're sweet ears listen.

A smile creeps across your face,
My heart starts to race.
We talk for hours,
Oh, the beauty of God's great powers!

So let these words escape my lips
And rub off from on finger tips.
For, could it be,
That you are the one for me?


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on Dec. 29 2010 at 5:17 pm
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

Hey, if you wouldn't mind, could you please check out the poem I submitted?  Thanks in advance!!!

on Dec. 16 2010 at 8:29 pm
MacSchiff SILVER, Louisville, Kentucky
8 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You can't live your life for other people. You've got to do what's right for you, even if it hurts some people you love."
— Nicholas Sparks (The Notebook)

"When you're struggling with something, look at all the people around you and realize that every single person you see is struggling with something, and to them, it's just as hard as what you're going through."
— Nicholas Sparks (Dear John)

awe thank you so much!

on Dec. 7 2010 at 7:45 pm
brysmarie12 PLATINUM, Neoga, Illinois
22 articles 1 photo 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am the author of my own life... unfortunately I'm writing in pen and can't erase my mistakes.

Aww I love this (: Especially how you say 'my gift sent from above' nice job!

on Dec. 6 2010 at 8:46 pm
MacSchiff SILVER, Louisville, Kentucky
8 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You can't live your life for other people. You've got to do what's right for you, even if it hurts some people you love."
— Nicholas Sparks (The Notebook)

"When you're struggling with something, look at all the people around you and realize that every single person you see is struggling with something, and to them, it's just as hard as what you're going through."
— Nicholas Sparks (Dear John)

Awe thank you so much!  That means a lot(: I hope you and your guy work out!

Basketball23 said...
on Dec. 6 2010 at 1:36 pm
This is an amazing poem!!!  I have a boyfriend and I always think, "Is he the one for me?"  I completley relate to this!!!! I love this piece of literature... keepp on writing!!!!




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