Secret in my Pocket

November 11, 2010
By BlueInk94 PLATINUM, Valley Park, Missouri
BlueInk94 PLATINUM, Valley Park, Missouri
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i hold a secret
tucked in my left pocket
where it has sat for days
untouched, untold, unheard
until i reach inside
and gently pull it out
careful not to let
the wind take it, carry it away
i raise it to my lips
which have been unsealed
and let it flow out
until its all gone
and my pocket is left flat, empty.



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on Sep. 25 2012 at 6:52 pm
BlueInk94 PLATINUM, Valley Park, Missouri
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thank you so much! that means a lot to me! i wasn't sure if this poem was too short or not so..Thanx.

so_joy SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2012 at 5:29 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

I know I already commented but I just want to say I added this to my favorites.

so_joy SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2012 at 5:28 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

I love this! This poem means something different to everyone, because the secret can really be anything you want it to be. Great work. Keep writing!

Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!


Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Nov. 3 2011 at 9:13 pm
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

Love it!

Check out my work sometime?


meg not meg said...
on Dec. 6 2010 at 6:19 pm
this is really good. you must be a literary genius! i love it! its very abstract!


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