Wish You Were Here

November 12, 2010
By TheArchitect ELITE, Madison, Wisconsin
TheArchitect ELITE, Madison, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
-Anything said by Mr. T
- Ill be in my bunk
- Im so clever that half the time I don't even understand what I'm saying

sliding off my umbrella
I catch one on my tongue
it tastes of summer
my hair sticks to my face
but I am happy here
with the damp grass clinging to my bare feet
and my dress limp about my knees
the only thing I wish
is that you were here too

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on Nov. 30 2010 at 9:21 pm
SpringRayyn PLATINUM, Lakeville, Minnesota
34 articles 2 photos 658 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't punish yourself," she heard her say again, but there would be punishment and pain, and there would be happiness too. That was writing."
--Markus Zusak, "The Book Thief"

I like how you used imagery here

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