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Sunshine

November 9, 2010
By SanGes SILVER, Doha, Other
SanGes SILVER, Doha, Other
5 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm so awesome im jealous of myself"


When the walls are closing in
When nothing seems right
Don't give up, don't lose hope
Just stand there and fight

You're feeling low, depressed
sad or really down
When you have lost all faith
And your heart is filled with hate

Remember there'll always be sunshine
Coming your way
Brightening your day
There'll always be sunshine
Come what may
And one fine day it will be here to stay

Gloomy days and vengeance
Mistrust and revenge
When you get up on the wrong side of the bed
Every day is another one that you dread

You feel like crying all the time
Bury your head in a pillow and cry
Don't let yourself down
Overcome all your fears

Remember there'll always be sunshine
Coming your way
Brightening your day
There'll always be sunshine
Come what may
And one fine day it will be here to stay



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cookiestar said...
on Jan. 7 2012 at 8:46 am
Wow. This is amazing. It's beautifully written:). It's meaningful.

on Jan. 7 2012 at 8:34 am
Jappyalldayeveryday, Detroit, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
They say that good things take time, but really great things happen in the blink of an eye

This is really nice :)

Matice BRONZE said...
on Dec. 24 2011 at 12:40 pm
Matice BRONZE, O&#39Fallon, Missouri
2 articles 0 photos 141 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Maria, first, let me say that you will most certainly regret it. Second, let me say that I'm in."-Smith

I enjoyed reading it. You had good solid paragraphs and sentences. I think you could improve it if you included a bit more imagery. It was sort of hard for me to have a picture in my mind as I read. Overall, amazing job. Keep writing! I'd be honored if you were able to take a look at some of my work. Feedback means a lot to me.

SanGes SILVER said...
on Jul. 4 2011 at 6:38 am
SanGes SILVER, Doha, Other
5 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm so awesome im jealous of myself"

Thanku soooooooooooooooo much! Thats a  huge compliment!

on Jul. 3 2011 at 10:21 pm
SaddleShoeGal PLATINUM, Granite Canyon, Wyoming
23 articles 42 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
"History is the key to the future"--Melinda Emerson
"Never tell the truth to those unworthy of it"--Mark Twain

This is really good! I love it! You should make it into a song!

SanGes SILVER said...
on Nov. 25 2010 at 11:22 am
SanGes SILVER, Doha, Other
5 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm so awesome im jealous of myself"

Am I?? I hope to continue to make u proud! thanks aunt!

nuz123 said...
on Nov. 25 2010 at 8:38 am
teen ink???such profound thought darling!!!! u r surely makin us proud.