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When the walls are closing in
When nothing seems right
Don't give up, don't lose hope
Just stand there and fight

You're feeling low, depressed
sad or really down
When you have lost all faith
And your heart is filled with hate

Remember there'll always be sunshine
Coming your way
Brightening your day
There'll always be sunshine
Come what may
And one fine day it will be here to stay

Gloomy days and vengeance
Mistrust and revenge
When you get up on the wrong side of the bed
Every day is another one that you dread

You feel like crying all the time
Bury your head in a pillow and cry
Don't let yourself down
Overcome all your fears

Remember there'll always be sunshine
Coming your way
Brightening your day
There'll always be sunshine
Come what may
And one fine day it will be here to stay



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cookiestar said...
Jan. 7, 2012 at 8:46 am:
Wow. This is amazing. It's beautifully written:). It's meaningful.
 
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Jappyalldayeveryday said...
Jan. 7, 2012 at 8:34 am:
This is really nice :)
 
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Matice said...
Dec. 24, 2011 at 12:40 pm:
I enjoyed reading it. You had good solid paragraphs and sentences. I think you could improve it if you included a bit more imagery. It was sort of hard for me to have a picture in my mind as I read. Overall, amazing job. Keep writing! I'd be honored if you were able to take a look at some of my work. Feedback means a lot to me.
 
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SaddleShoeGal This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 3, 2011 at 10:21 pm:
This is really good! I love it! You should make it into a song!
 
SanGesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 4, 2011 at 6:38 am :
Thanku soooooooooooooooo much! Thats a  huge compliment!
 
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nuz123 said...
Nov. 25, 2010 at 8:38 am:
teen ink???such profound thought darling!!!! u r surely makin us proud.
 
SaniaGesudrazThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 25, 2010 at 11:22 am :
Am I?? I hope to continue to make u proud! thanks aunt!
 
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