Ravens

By , San Tan Valley, AZ
I linger within the den of shadows
Waiting patiently
To join the Ravens.

Forebear unknown,
Why spawn such a
Vain lad?

May it be fate
But a life he continues
To ruin.


His idiocy and impatience are widely astray

Disgrace is he who bears your name.

Sadism he shows,
Within a thunderous laughter.
Intimidation he blows,
A strong storm a blow as thunders remain strong.

Joining the Ravens
Must I
When my time of peril arises.

Craving the word protect
And acquiring it
Within my soul.


A daily showing of anxiety, unknown

In minds including mine.

Valor thought as I make my debut in the flock.

The kin of the so called king
Ceases
As he breathes his last.
Slash to where my blade reaches.
Fluid as red as the maroon moon.
Luscious in it's own might,

I refuse the temptation.
But abandon
All sadism for my observations.

Dead he lays as deaths cold fingers
Collect his damned soul.

Awakened as I lay in my hearts cold sweat.

Content is I
Who envisioned the 'kings' demise





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BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 26, 2010 at 3:49 pm
eah...you're too deep fo rme captain. please do excuse my limitations,...I love the last two lines.
 
BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 26, 2010 at 3:50 pm
sorry the the typos. do your dance.
 
Xerxes replied...
Nov. 27, 2010 at 1:55 am
You are excused, but it was a very deep topic of choice for me, but eh, it was a leisurly poem anyway...
 
BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 27, 2010 at 6:26 pm
if by that L word you mean in your spare time then thats just awesome, this seems like you traveled the world and been to camelot and did who knows what and came and wrote this. i wonder what you write when you effort much apply.
 
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