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My promises

November 8, 2010
By Tatyana DIAMOND, Colorado, Colorado
Tatyana DIAMOND, Colorado, Colorado
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My promises are weak as they come to me
My promises are nothing to believe
Their weak as i believe my promises are nothing to you nor me
My promises make you cry because you know i don't mean it inside
My promises hurt you because all the things i do
My promises symbolizes i'm not through lying to to
When i promise i'm not being truthful to you



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TrinityCreed said...
on Dec. 6 2010 at 8:40 am
that's very mush a tear jerker. that's a very good poem tatyana. wow! when u make time 4 urself plz read my poem "Lost Friend". that will show u wat im going through and, yes im trying to . . . i dont want to . . . i still want to be ur friend. :( plz . . . i know we said "good bye" but it feels that my heart has been ripped out. plz read my poem. i am sorry 4 wat i did and, its hurting my heart. i cant get u out of my mind. plz, at least tlk to me. i cant bare to loose  friend. i still call u my friend. i know i dont deserve it, but plz give 1 last chance. this time i will make sure i wont do something horrible like last time. i cant promise, but i will do my best. :(

on Nov. 23 2010 at 7:47 pm
Tatyana DIAMOND, Colorado, Colorado
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