Trapped By The Room

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The room

The screams

The spinning

The memories

The crying

It holds me

Im trapped by a room thats suppose to be empty





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AnonyMiss said...
Nov. 23, 2010 at 11:32 pm
I really like all of the emotion that this poem evokes. and the last line has such a nice rythm...good job!
 
Tatyana replied...
Nov. 24, 2010 at 2:14 am
thanks 
 
SKSK1214 said...
Nov. 23, 2010 at 8:08 pm
It lacks a bit of structure and body, but i do see what your going for. It has potential, you just have to tweak it a little. Good start though.
 
Tatyana replied...
Nov. 23, 2010 at 9:52 pm
i understand thanks 4 ur comment
 
Tatyana said...
Nov. 23, 2010 at 7:57 pm

please leave your most honest comment

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 
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