Daisies

November 8, 2010
By ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
That which we persist in doing becomes easier, not that the task itself has become easier, but that our ability to perform it has improved.
Ralph Waldo Emerson
<3


I wasted all my time
Plucking petals off of
Daisies.
I didn’t even see you walk by.

He loves me
He loves me not
Apparently the last petal was not
I saw the picture

Of her and him
They were having so much fun
I was plucking petals
Off of Daises.

You came over
With Daises.
I pulled every petal off.
He loves me. He loves me not.

How did I not see that YOU'D love me
Even if the petals don’t say so.
YOU'D love me
Forever and ever.

But I was wrapped up in my confusion
of Daisy petals.
Swirling around
As they fell to the ground.


The author's comments:
I love Daisies. They are so beautiful! :> This was the best picture I could find though. I think it's alright although I would have liked to find just one daisy. All I could find was one with a bee on it. That won't do.

This one is for my Reyna. I Lalalalalove you!!!! :)))))))

<3

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on Nov. 26 2010 at 10:21 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."

Haha I can tell :) But I bet you like writing everthing you write!  I dooooo!

on Nov. 26 2010 at 5:19 pm
ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
29 articles 0 photos 204 comments

Favorite Quote:
That which we persist in doing becomes easier, not that the task itself has become easier, but that our ability to perform it has improved.
Ralph Waldo Emerson
<3

Thanks Alana. I really appreciate it. I loved writing this... :)

on Nov. 24 2010 at 4:23 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."

Aww this is good! Daisies are very pretty!!!

I especially loved

"How did I not see that YOU'D love me
Even if the petals don’t say so.
YOU'D love me
Forever and ever."


on Nov. 24 2010 at 3:22 pm
ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
29 articles 0 photos 204 comments

Favorite Quote:
That which we persist in doing becomes easier, not that the task itself has become easier, but that our ability to perform it has improved.
Ralph Waldo Emerson
<3

Thanks Ale. I think I wrote this while suffering insomnia... :>

on Nov. 23 2010 at 9:18 am
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

Whoa Elly! This is SO good! Super relatable and simply beautiful :)))))


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