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First Line By The Ataris (Nonexistent)

November 7, 2010
By princetonlover BRONZE, Rumson, New Jersey
princetonlover BRONZE, Rumson, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
the road less traveled has better music.


Cherry cokes under this moonlit summer sky
Wishing on those ever-present shooting stars
And wondering why Pluto isn’t a planet anymore
There must be a reason why, you say
But I just don’t understand
Why it can’t be like all the others
The constellations begin to sing
The man on the moon is dancing
We are listening to their universal song
The North Star blinds me
I can only feel your hand in mine
Our breathing becomes rhythmic
As you reassure me that Pluto is, in fact,
Just like all the other planets
That are far above our glittering sky
I close my eyes, promised
That one day justice and the universe
Will be as present as your convincing words.


The author's comments:
In my Creative Writing class, we were given a prompt in which every student wrote a first line to a poem and we each traded lines with someone else. Then, we had to write a poem around that first line that we picked. I decided to use a line from the song "In This Diary" by one of my favorite bands, The Ataris.

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