We Real Smart

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The Teacher's Pets
Five in the frount of the classroom

We real smart. We have perfect attendance. We

Prowel the boundries. We
Learn to behave. We

Listen to Lectures. We
Take oppertunities. We

Overachieve on tests. We
Drive our lives.





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LoveLikeEpic said...
Nov. 18, 2010 at 9:28 am
We had to write a poem exactly like in this in English. Yours is epic.
 
YankeeSwagg said...
Nov. 18, 2010 at 9:14 am
very cute (:
 
kmarie14 said...
Nov. 17, 2010 at 10:28 pm
:) luv luv this! :) ha ha it was awesome :P check out my work?
 
sunnyandsugar This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 17, 2010 at 12:48 pm
wow, amazing i agree with AaronLawrence,  this was very ironic and really enjoyable I'd love to have your opinon on some of my work.
 
bluegirl440 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 17, 2010 at 9:58 am
I love the original as well as this poem. It was fun comparing the two.
 
MRose911 said...
Nov. 16, 2010 at 9:57 pm
this poem is awesome!! :) i love it!! :) check out my work?
 
fatesknocking said...
Nov. 16, 2010 at 9:44 pm
i knew right when i saw the title that you used We Real Cool. i love that poem, and your poem is awesome! nice job (:
 
missTaco said...
Nov. 15, 2010 at 1:51 pm

lol, nice poem. kind of short tho..

 

 
AaronLawrence said...
Nov. 15, 2010 at 11:33 am
Extremly good.  The only thing was We real cool sounds ironic cause of its poor grammer but We Real Smart leads you to believe your talking about the opposite.  Also, mispelling front does the same thing.
 
Karamel This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 15, 2010 at 6:42 pm
Agreed. This poem was a bit more unorthodox than most, which is why I appreciated it. Keep writing!
 
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