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yes you hear it outside the hospital window

October 31, 2010
By M.L.Decter BRONZE, Winnipeg, Other
M.L.Decter BRONZE, Winnipeg, Other
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Favorite Quote:
“In love's godlike breathing, there's the innermost aspect of the universe.”
-Alexander Scriabin


Along the way traveled, white walls and engulf
Four more weary visits. Wide eyes breathing desperate air inside/outside
There sits a spruce, a truth. Swaying
Silently in anticipation of collapse, she laughts and drinks
And her vision fades and her judgement
Fails-all in good fun/misery
Leads me to strain troubled eyelids forcing thirst of-
Well,
Sadness. Regret. Bliss? Could
Relaxation ease the suffrage. Please the roughness of its time/evermore/infinite cries of joy
echo as it topples over the white walls
Eyes closing and engulf
Darkness one last time/

The author's comments:
Inspiration for this piece comes from the mystery of one's last moments on earth, what passes through your head and if salvation exists in a single moment.

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on Nov. 17 2010 at 1:24 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Wow omg this is so good and descriptive!! i love it!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be amazing!! thanksso much and ur so good!!!