yes you hear it outside the hospital window

October 31, 2010
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Along the way traveled, white walls and engulf
Four more weary visits. Wide eyes breathing desperate air inside/outside
There sits a spruce, a truth. Swaying
Silently in anticipation of collapse, she laughts and drinks
And her vision fades and her judgement
Fails-all in good fun/misery
Leads me to strain troubled eyelids forcing thirst of-
Sadness. Regret. Bliss? Could
Relaxation ease the suffrage. Please the roughness of its time/evermore/infinite cries of joy
echo as it topples over the white walls
Eyes closing and engulf
Darkness one last time/

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crubs33 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 17, 2010 at 1:24 pm
Wow omg this is so good and descriptive!! i love it!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be amazing!! thanksso much and ur so good!!!
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