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My Soul Contains My Life

October 29, 2010
By yawesome22 BRONZE, Milford, Michigan
yawesome22 BRONZE, Milford, Michigan
3 articles 6 photos 16 comments

My soul contains
A special grain
That lets me sleep
From dawn to dusk
Every day
That special grain
Lets me dream
A silent
Night

Portrays
darkness
In which I
Rest.
The essential grain
Lets me
Review my life
Of all the wrongs
And all the rights
Most of the time
I spend my
Days nights
Remembering what
used
to be my
Life.

Some moments
I replay and replay
Those videotapes
Those special moments
Of birthdays
and friends
Family
and School
Memories
That made my life
One blissful moment—
Memories
Of what
used
to be my
Life.

I will never forget
The joyful moments
Of my life

When I
Will always have
The videotapes
My soul
Gave me
As a
Gift of thanks
For the moments
I have
Shared with my soul,
What I shared,
With my soul
contains what
used
to be my
Life.


The author's comments:
Learned from a friend that writing very late at night actually ends with some kind of awesome writing. True, very true.

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Ally said...
on Jan. 14 2011 at 5:03 pm
I agree with Alex, this was really good!

Alex8 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 14 2010 at 4:50 pm
Alex8 BRONZE, Howell, Michigan
2 articles 5 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
life is not about waiting for the storm to pass but learning to dance in the rain...

bravo!!! awesome writing!!!

kidmick98 GOLD said...
on Nov. 13 2010 at 11:58 am
kidmick98 GOLD, Gulliver, Michigan
16 articles 4 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
I will act as if I do make a difference. -- William James

Oh, I wonder who your friend is that told you to write stuff late at night............. :  )

on Nov. 12 2010 at 12:06 pm
shoelessjoe GOLD, Highland, Michigan
19 articles 0 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't tell me the sky's the limit when ther are footsteps on the moon"
"Instead of waiting for the storm to pass, learn to dance in the rain"
"The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams"

 I love it so much!! congrats on geitting published again!!! And i agree with mikey, this is great!!!!!!!

on Nov. 12 2010 at 12:03 pm
yawesome22 BRONZE, Milford, Michigan
3 articles 6 photos 16 comments
Thank you very much----Feedback!!!

Mickey said...
on Nov. 12 2010 at 8:03 am
Daniel!!!!!!!!!! This is so great! I LOVE it!!!!!!!