Protection from Yourself

October 22, 2010
By darraasheaa GOLD, New City, New York
darraasheaa GOLD, New City, New York
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Here I am,
Exposed and Unprotected,
out in the Open for the world to see.
I put myself out Here,
facing either Rejection or Acceptance
as people Judge and Comment,
Criticize and Observe,
as if I wanted their opinions.
As if I wanted to be this Vulnerable thing,
helpless and Empty,
lacking any form of armor or shield to
reflect back their beliefs,
after all, their words mean Nothing to me.
They don’t bother me, I barely mind,
Really.
If only the thoughts stayed out of my Mind,
stopped poking through the holes in my
instinctive Force Field.
If only they had no effect on
the Way I See Myself.
It’s not like they Hurt me or anything.
No, no, of course not.



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on Nov. 14 2010 at 5:13 pm
nickykens ELITE, Draper, Utah
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I love the obvious denial and the feeling of wanting to believe it's true... amazing.

on Nov. 13 2010 at 7:52 pm
CarveTheMoon PLATINUM, New City, New York
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Favorite Quote:
If music be the food of love play on!

I still love 2 read it over! im srry haha u r rlly GOOD! :P

on Nov. 11 2010 at 4:41 pm
I love this i really do and the picture fits in perfect! i kinda wanna read it over and over :P-check out my work? up 2 u but please keep writing!!!!


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