Remembering Sunday

October 25, 2010
By alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."


I remember where I was,
(At Olive Garden).
And who was with me,
(My mom and dad).
I remember what day,
(It was Sunday).
And when it was,
(The first week of summer).
I remember my expression when he texted me,
(A brace-filled smile).
And my expression after I read what he had to say,
(A frown and a bitten lip to keep from crying).
I remember what the text had said,
(We’re not going to ever see each other this summer so maybe we should just end it now).
And my emotions,
(Sad, alone, dumped).
I remember where I was,
(In a dark hole beginning to fill with salty water).
And when it was,
(The first week of hell).
I remember what day,
(Sunday).
And how my heart felt,
(Broken…)


The author's comments:
Yea he did this to me...it still hurts but everytime I see his smile it hurts that much less and the wound begins to close...until recently. Now my wounds have re-opened and I don't know what to do. Any suggestions???

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on Nov. 12 2010 at 3:56 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."

Thank you :) And yeah i suppose over time I'll get over him

on Nov. 12 2010 at 3:54 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."

:) Thank you. That means a lot and yeah you're right - there's nothing more thereaupuetic than writing. Thank you again!

on Nov. 12 2010 at 5:20 am
taintedannex GOLD, Hong Kong, Other
15 articles 5 photos 166 comments

Favorite Quote:
The truth is that at some point, everyone's going to hurt you. You just have to decide who's worth the pain.

Some say having something to lose is what makes you vulnerable. I believe that having something to lose only makes you stronger.

Beautiful. Don't worry. You'll be fine. And you always have words, poetry, and Teenink to help you through.

For me, there is nothing more thereaupatic than writing, even if it ends up being no more than a waste of paper in terms of the actual quality of the work produced. But that's not the important part. The emotions of paper? The thoughts? That's what's important. And the writing community here? We'll help you through. :)


hepburn said...
on Nov. 12 2010 at 5:10 am
hepburn, Assd, Other
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Favorite Quote:
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I like this style of poem :)

As for the guy... The same thing happened to me. After a month of moping around i realized it was a waste of time and just like that i got over it. But its not the same for everyone.. good luck :)


on Nov. 8 2010 at 8:23 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."

Awwww thank you :)

on Nov. 8 2010 at 8:22 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."

Yea this past summer :/ haha and yea! good choice not postin that on the web for the hole world to see! hehe :D

on Nov. 7 2010 at 5:30 pm
elisianicole101 PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
34 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing ever truely dies, it just transforms into something beautiful

Sooooo i think it's amazin(: <3 I'm here 4 ya too <-:

on Nov. 7 2010 at 2:10 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

Like this past summer or the summer after 8th grade? Just wondering (I get it if you don't wanna say). Well I hope everything works out. Haha Thanks! I wish I coulda stayed and talked to you! Mr. Ellis made me leave. :( I have some stuff to tell you that is too specific to put on the web for the world to see so I'll text you! :)

on Nov. 7 2010 at 12:44 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."

Yea it is it happened last summer and  haven't eaten there since then until last weekend and it was like deja vu ha :/ and thanks :) I'll letcha kno if I need ur help:) I saw ya at the game friday! Your hair was really pretty!!! lol

on Nov. 7 2010 at 12:28 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

Wow Alana I'm so sorry :( Is his about that guy? The one we talked about? Let me know if I can help okay? <3 Alex


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