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CHOCOLATE!!!! :)

October 19, 2010
By LittleSissy95 GOLD, Lincoln, Illinois
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\\\\\\\"Even though with everything that has happen i still think people are good at heart\\\\\\\" -Anne Frank

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Sweet and delicious.
Dark and rich
Chocolate
Chewy and tasty
It's chocolate
and you know it is delicious.

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ChocoMint SILVER said...
on Aug. 26 2011 at 4:55 pm
ChocoMint SILVER, Bloomington, Indiana
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I like the poem, but I had a sense of emptiness while reading it. There was so little description about it and at the end you repeated yourself a little. It's just my personal opinion, but I feel it could use a little bit more meat, if you understand that. :+P  Keep it up though!
delz4 GOLD said...
on Aug. 25 2011 at 10:47 pm
delz4 GOLD, San Francisco, California
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true that 
Garnet77 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 25 2011 at 5:13 am
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I completely agree with you. I LOVE CHOCOLATE. :)
MidnightFire PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 31 2011 at 8:11 pm
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Sooooo true :)