Of The Beginning

Her heart pounding,

his eyes shifting

their hands intertwined
their love soars

below the stars

on the balcony

in the dark

in the beginning

of their life.





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tangem This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 7, 2011 at 10:58 pm
Wow.. well done!
 
ashbash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 27, 2010 at 12:01 pm
this is absolutely beautiful! So few lines, so much impact. You put so much into so little, which is part of amazing writing skill. You are an amazing writer and should do the world a favor by keeping up with your work! Five stars!
 
elmosoreo replied...
Feb. 24, 2011 at 3:08 pm
Thanks :) I've been at  writer's block right now... it's sad :(
 
DaughterofEvil replied...
Mar. 15, 2011 at 5:02 pm
I agree with what ashbash said. I really couldn't have said it better. another 5/5!
 
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