Of The Beginning

October 21, 2010
By elmosoreo SILVER, Paducah, Kentucky
elmosoreo SILVER, Paducah, Kentucky
8 articles 2 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
Oftentimes we say goodbye to the person we love without wanting to. Though that doesn’t mean that we've stopped loving them or we've stopped to care. Sometimes goodbye is a painful way to say I love you....


Her heart pounding,

his eyes shifting

their hands intertwined
their love soars

below the stars

on the balcony

in the dark

in the beginning

of their life.


The author's comments:
English Poetry Challenge ^.^

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on Mar. 15 2011 at 5:02 pm
I agree with what ashbash said. I really couldn't have said it better. another 5/5!

on Mar. 7 2011 at 10:58 pm
TanGem PLATINUM, Colorado Springs, Colorado
34 articles 0 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is not a feeling; it is a gift, an act, an ultimate sacrifice. -Me (Em)

Wow.. well done!

on Feb. 24 2011 at 3:08 pm
elmosoreo SILVER, Paducah, Kentucky
8 articles 2 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
Oftentimes we say goodbye to the person we love without wanting to. Though that doesn’t mean that we've stopped loving them or we've stopped to care. Sometimes goodbye is a painful way to say I love you....

Thanks :) I've been at  writer's block right now... it's sad :(

on Nov. 27 2010 at 12:01 pm
iAmTheStardust PLATINUM, Moon Twp., Pennsylvania
36 articles 1 photo 94 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The prettiest flowers grow in the biggest pile of manure."

this is absolutely beautiful! So few lines, so much impact. You put so much into so little, which is part of amazing writing skill. You are an amazing writer and should do the world a favor by keeping up with your work! Five stars!


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