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All Done

October 22, 2010
By PrincessPea PLATINUM, Covington, Georgia
PrincessPea PLATINUM, Covington, Georgia
23 articles 0 photos 71 comments

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IMPOSSIBLE TO KNOCK ME OFF MY ROAD TO SUCCESS


In my bed crying
people calling me,"What's wrong?"
and all I told them
is,"That boy is so wrong."

They asked,"What happened now?"
I said,"That boy talking crap."
They said,"Girl I told you
you should've gave him a slap."

I know I should have
but I trusted him so much
now I know what he really is
all he wants is touch.

I hope he knows
I'm not that kind of girl
I don't even wear my hair
all pinned up and curled.

I am a person
who just likes to play around
I AM THIS ONE AND ONLY GIRL
who really really hates clowns.

I am tired of being told
all that you do
now I really wonder
do I even know you?

Hey but get this
when I don't see you,my day is good
and don't think it's because
I grew up the hood.

Everythime I look at you
I just shake my head
I at times actually wish
my feelings for you are dead.

My girls got my back
I can see you don't
you mess with me, you mess with them
and they aint no joke.

So I am moving on
your left in the dark
I hope you know
your crossed out my heart.



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on Nov. 4 2010 at 4:51 pm
PrincessPea PLATINUM, Covington, Georgia
23 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
IMPOSSIBLE TO KNOCK ME OFF MY ROAD TO SUCCESS

thanks for your comment i sure will keep writing:) and sure ill check yours out 

on Nov. 4 2010 at 4:36 pm
Hannahgee6 BRONZE, Greensburg, Kentucky
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therefore do not worry about tomorrow. for tomorrow will worry about itself. each day has enough trouble of its own.
-jesus

this is great!! i love how you constructed this poem! keep writing. :)

 comment on some of mine? thanks. :)

 


on Nov. 4 2010 at 4:03 pm
PrincessPea PLATINUM, Covington, Georgia
23 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
IMPOSSIBLE TO KNOCK ME OFF MY ROAD TO SUCCESS

thanks!!! im a still developing poet. but plz comment on my other poems.....thanks much

on Nov. 4 2010 at 1:17 pm
NothingButAli GOLD, Silver Lake, Indiana
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"The best things in life are better left unseen. that's why we close our eyes when we cry, kiss, and dream"- Anonymous

nice way of describeing how you feel. it really shows in this piece. (: