Oak Tree This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

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Oak Tree,
Round and Strong,
Rustling leaves,
A dark villainous monster,
Staring into the night.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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Shane_Zeh_Banderbear said...
Aug. 14, 2008 at 11:04 pm
Eh. I totally don't agree with an Oak Tree being a 'villainous monster' but the poem was ok. I like reading/writing poems in this format.

However, I'd change the ying-yang focusing here. Since the Oak Tree, to you, is a 'villainous monster', I'd change the other lines to show that. The other lines are ying-yang-neutral.
Otherwise, good poem Grace.
 
AlliesWorld91 said...
Aug. 14, 2008 at 3:13 am
I'm sorry but I didn't enjoy this one too much. It just wasn't my style. It's much too plain for me, maybe more creative writing discribtion?
 
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