Scars & Shooting Stars

October 3, 2010
By CarzKemp DIAMOND, Lyons, New York
CarzKemp DIAMOND, Lyons, New York
68 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
if you take the "F" out of Life
you'll be living a lie-Carz Kemp


Tattoo Your Lies

Unto My Heart.

Undo My Scars

With Your Charm.

Patch Up My Past

With Your Eyes.

Posses My Heart

With Your Mind.

Eyes Only Seek

Of Lost Stars.

Trapped

In This Land

This Land

Of Broken Hearts.

Although, The Stars

Are Always Bright,

I've Got Every Reason

To Be Afraid Of The Dark.

Because Beautiful Dreams,

Turn To Nightmares

With You In My Arms.



Life In The Beginning,

My Head Was

High In The Clouds.

Only A Part Of Me Stare,

With My Eyes On The Ground.

But Reality Spoke Of A Princess,

And This Princesses Heart

Spoke Of A Pact.

Little Did I Know,

Her Heart Was Not Intact.

So I Grabbed My Needles,

Grabbed My Thread..

And Took The Time,

To Sew Her Back

Back Together Again.

So Nights Went By.

And So She Fell In Love

With A Prince.

Truly HE Was A Peasant,

He Was Nothing Close

To Perfectness.



So The Peasant

Brought His Princess

To The Sky Of Scars.

And As She Stared Into His Eyes,

She Saw A Lonely Broken Heart.

So As They Gazed At The Sky,

He Told Her

A Once Apon A Time..

Of A Young Peasant

In His Prime.

Long On A Journey,

Searching

Searching

For Shooting Stars.

Shooting Stars

Lost In The Dark.

When He Found His First,

It Burned A Beautiful Red.

He Followed It For Years.

Eventually The Star Bled.

Slowly Fading It Bled.

As He Lyed There Crying,

He Learned What It Was Like,

To Be Dead Before Dying.



In The End,

Hollowed And Alone,

This Mistake

Was His Own.

She Left Him.

Cold.

Broken.

Lost Words.

Forever Unspoken.

And Maybe

It'd Be Possible

To Heal This Dead Mute,

If Only

If Only,

Her Last Words

Were

"I Love You..."



She Tattooed Her Lies

Unto His Heart.

Undid His Scars

With Her Charm.

Possessed His Heart

With Her Mind.

His Eyes Only Sought

Of Lost Stars.

Trapped, Left To Die.

In This Land,

This Land Of Broken Hearts.

This Twas A Story

Of A Peasant,

Who Became Afraid

Of The Dark.

If Only,

If Only,

Shooting Stars

Left No Marks.



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This article has 11 comments.


on Feb. 2 2012 at 10:26 am
CarzKemp DIAMOND, Lyons, New York
68 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
if you take the "F" out of Life
you'll be living a lie-Carz Kemp

Thanks everyone for the comments. I appreciate it.

on Mar. 5 2011 at 11:39 pm
Rainbowmadhatter, Reno, Nevada
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beautiful amazing heart wrenching i love it my most favorite part is how you had that part in the begining and the one at the end and how its so alike.

 


on Jan. 6 2011 at 6:45 am
TheSpiritOfMe GOLD, Fort Waynee, Indiana
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Yes, totally.

I really love this poem!


on Jan. 3 2011 at 7:08 am
CarzKemp DIAMOND, Lyons, New York
68 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
if you take the "F" out of Life
you'll be living a lie-Carz Kemp

check out my other work to when you get the chance?

on Nov. 29 2010 at 12:55 pm
TheSpiritOfMe GOLD, Fort Waynee, Indiana
13 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Beautiful. Would you be so kind as to read my work . ?

Only one is published to the site though...


on Nov. 9 2010 at 6:52 pm
CarzKemp DIAMOND, Lyons, New York
68 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
if you take the "F" out of Life
you'll be living a lie-Carz Kemp

thank you very much! I really Appreciate It.. And I Promise To Take A Look.

on Oct. 27 2010 at 6:27 am
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

This is SO inspiring and beautiful! Its so creative and unique and I love the story behind it. SO well written. Great job! My favorite part is: Cold. Broken. Lost Words. Forever Unspoken.

Amazing. Could you check out my stuff if you get a second? Thanks and keep writing, you're crazy talented! :)


on Oct. 26 2010 at 6:43 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."

This was amazing! I'm jealous :D I absoluetely LOVED how you ended it with the beginning and my #1 favorite part was:

"As He Lyed There Crying,

He Learned What It Was Like,

To Be Dead Before Dying."

Gives me goose bumps it's so good :D

 


Rox18 SILVER said...
on Oct. 26 2010 at 4:44 pm
Rox18 SILVER, Riverside, California
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"As he lyed there crying, he learned what it was like, to be dead before dying." wow...the whole poem is  perfect but this verse sticks out like no other. good job on this poem :]

on Oct. 26 2010 at 11:47 am
Tatyana DIAMOND, Colorado, Colorado
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this was the best poem i read this is really good

on Oct. 25 2010 at 2:04 pm
LilStinka SILVER, Lynden, Washington
5 articles 4 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Advice is what we ask for when we already know the answer but wish we didn't. - Erica Jong
Tis an ill cook that cannot lick his own fingers. - Shakespeare

WOW! i really liked how you started it and ended it with the same kind of thing. I love how you told the story of heartbreak, you're really good! :)


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