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So beautiful are your white folded wings,
Tired from flying in blue sky’s,
But now the sky becomes dull,
Like my wings, grey and dark,
We watch the rain,
As it falls gently on our heads,
So warm are your hand that lay in mine,
So soft are your lips that rest on mine,
So happy am I to have your love....





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thatpoetgirl said...
Oct. 22, 2010 at 5:40 pm
i absolutely love the end !
 
puckett29 replied...
Nov. 7, 2010 at 6:17 pm
thank you :)
 
puckett29 said...
Oct. 21, 2010 at 4:45 pm
thank you everone :)
 
UnwantedNinja said...
Oct. 21, 2010 at 3:27 pm
This poem makes an amazing picture in my mind :)
 
kaileye said...
Oct. 21, 2010 at 3:22 pm
i love this, because i take it as the up and downs of love... beautiful
 
through_my_eyes said...
Oct. 20, 2010 at 9:19 pm
this is cute :)
 
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