The Bubble

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The bubble,
On the surface so rainbowy,
on the inside hollow.
Disguises the fact of hollowness
with a rainbowy smile.
So much like me,
little bubble.
People do not understand you
as I do.
Floating down, down to your doom,
your fragile surface
a thin mask to the truth.
So much like me, little bubble.
Pop!





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moon_beam said...
Mar. 14, 2011 at 10:36 am
i mean this
 
moon_beam said...
Mar. 14, 2011 at 10:35 am
Is the about me.
 
SpringRayyn replied...
Mar. 14, 2011 at 10:16 pm
No. I didn't even know you when I wrote this.
 
Beachgirl1 said...
Mar. 13, 2011 at 9:31 pm
oh and i really like the photo too!
 
Beachgirl1 said...
Mar. 13, 2011 at 9:31 pm
this is a great poem!
 
Basketball23 said...
Mar. 12, 2011 at 9:29 am
I love everything about this!!!  Especially the interjections!!!
 
Hazel-daisy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 15, 2011 at 1:12 pm
i like the way it seems personal and i like the last bit too 'pop!' its simple but means a lot at the same time!!
 
super_nerd This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 19, 2011 at 4:41 am
Love the metaphor :)
 
Kbuschan said...
Jan. 1, 2011 at 4:48 pm
i love the descriptive yet simple details you wrote here like : disguises the fact of hollowness" and "with a rainbowy smile"
 
minnieokie said...
Oct. 25, 2010 at 10:35 pm
Nice symbolism, but unlike the bubble, you are not hollow.  Your work proves that.
 
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